12-31-2008, 08:39 AM
Like I said, I could of outdone what I did here.
Like masquerad epointed out I didn't explain fully who was talking, it wasn't descriptive enough, and not to mention I need to make the next part to this prologue, this prologue is very long.
Like masquerad epointed out I didn't explain fully who was talking, it wasn't descriptive enough, and not to mention I need to make the next part to this prologue, this prologue is very long.