Failed attempts at living simple lives are what keep me coming back to you

[blueeyedgabulvo0o]

Need some tea wise? *Smirks*

As always very interesting lyrics even though for a minute anthem it is actually pretty alright but compared to your last one this lacks the necessary melody that drums your words. Like a melody of "Come out and Play" by the Offspring mixed with "Date Rape" by Sublime. It is a fast pace lyric lines and there are two points where you should try to double up your tempo cause in your attempt you seem to have lost your place. Other then those two times, this is really not bad. ^^