Failed attempts at living simple lives are what keep me coming back to you

[Wisemon]

At the 32nd second on that rift, is there a way to add like a doo dah dah melody going lower? go lower instead of steadying constant will add to the punkish vibe that you have going in your song. I wish I could explain better. But for Wisemon's voice it would actually fit it perfectly. Very nice. Reminds me of a hybrid between Offspring and some SR-71.

I feel very humbled by this knowledge and skill I do not possess.

Ghost Op, I honestly believed your backstory, but nothing to be ashamed about being an average teenager; that's enviable as well. You could've started your own thread for that, but hey, more people in this thread now.