Failed attempts at living simple lives are what keep me coming back to you

[blueeyedgabulvo0o]

Well, well I actually thought of some free verse poetic expression rather then music, cause here is the funny thing is I hear you get really good when you begin a phrase but it some how falls apart tone wise in the middle before fixing itself at the end of it and ending it rather strong. The Chorus's of space in between where you get really high >> kind of interesting. I got to give it to you even though I know you could do better vocally it was a very interesting piece. A few parts I was surprised, the beginning was actual well done and the second to last chorus on what seems to be the fade out, you dropped your voice, it fit and cleaned it up slightly.

I don't know about anyone else, but I feel like a Frank Sinatra kind of Blues meets Elevator music behind him in a Ska fashion when he is saying this. Only thing you need is that raz. :P