05-27-2004, 06:09 AM
mhmh kay, I just read over your chapter 4
So why saying sorry for the lack of action there?
I see no reason to call it a bad one. Still in my point of view it is really good done.
Ok, it was a calmer episode then the one before, but the style is good and makes this one to a worthy read.
Anyways I see some important parts of the story. The telling of the next city and the mentioning of Veemon Village.
I like it too.
You have a lot of talent and you know it.
With the plans to make books sounds ok for me. It is a really big project of you. Hey make sure to give me all to read :P
So why saying sorry for the lack of action there?
I see no reason to call it a bad one. Still in my point of view it is really good done.
Ok, it was a calmer episode then the one before, but the style is good and makes this one to a worthy read.
Anyways I see some important parts of the story. The telling of the next city and the mentioning of Veemon Village.
I like it too.
You have a lot of talent and you know it.
With the plans to make books sounds ok for me. It is a really big project of you. Hey make sure to give me all to read :P