05-31-2007, 02:15 AM
Yes, crappy (though it does have some potential), not even devoid of typos. That's the first requirement when you intend to publish any piece of writing. Once you're done with that, I can give you a shit-load of tips for writing good poetry. Aside from the poetry courses I aced, I have gotten poems published in several poetry magazines. I wager I know poetry better than any other member of this board.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against