03-06-2007, 12:26 PM
Quote:It's just a short piece to give a reason for the rest of the fic...No, still sucks. I think you need to do more research.
The rest will be a lot better...
Quote:And what movie are you talking about?Name your own teen sex romp. I'd start with Porky's.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against