11-28-2003, 06:20 AM
I love the opening of the magna. And, if I may say, to justify the all-too-sudden sex sense, try having Cyborg and Beast Boy's intrucion (mispelled) being there when Raven had the lust flash a conicodence (mispelled). Raven's lust side must've appeared and is out of control.
Final notes: Raven and Starfire. 'nough said. And, if possible, have Blackfire have a cameo.
Final notes: Raven and Starfire. 'nough said. And, if possible, have Blackfire have a cameo.