07-23-2003, 02:32 PM
This is my first try at a lemon. Be gentle. ^_^
This is merely the beginning of the story. I'll post more when I've written more.
******
This is a lemon. If you don't know what that means, leave. If you think it's a yellow citrus fruit with a tangy, sour taste, leave. If you think it has anything to do with meringue and a nice, flaky crust, leave. If you think it's the major ingredient in a bittersweet liquid most commonly drunk during the summer months, leave. If you think it's something that goes best with lime in a soft drink, leave. If you think you can impale it on the rim of your glass of iced tea, leave.
If you DO read this, and discover that a lemon is NOT what you thought it was, you have learned your lesson, you little goober, and don't you go bothering me with your whining and petty lawsuits. I have better things to do, like listening to my toenails grow. Or my hair. The hair sounds especially nice in July and August. ^_^
If you do have a clue as to what a lemon is, enjoy. Or not. You decide.
This is Season 01, or, rather, shortly thereafter.
And on with the show!
***
I JUST LOVE YOU
by _agz_
Tai was jacking off to a different beat, his eyes fluidly dancing from panel to panel.
"Oh, Hotaru-chan..." he whispered, his body shifting with every downstroke his hand made on his rigid phallus. His other hand, while not nearly as active, was nonetheless busy as it held open Tai's copy of the "Submission Saturn" doujinshi. Some of the pages were visibly crusted together, and, as Tai did some manual maintenance, white flakes could be seen falling away from the mass and landing gently on the equally white sheets, where they dropped into blank anonymity.
Something in his balls twitched, and Tai gripped his dick tighter. He was almost there. Climax was just over a rise that was masturbation itself, he could see it from here. Just a little more, almost there, three, two, one--
"TAI!"
He froze, hand stuck on an upstroke.
"TAI!"
He thawed, and the hand holding the magazine flipped it closed and, in a flash of flesh and paper, dipped in and out of the crevice between the mattress and the frame of the bed. Now you see it, now you don't. There is nothing up my sleeve.
"TAI!" He could hear the ominous sound of shoes, thumping on the hardwood floor of the apartment, coming down the hall, coming towards *him*. Panicked, he shoved his still-hard member into his underwear.
"TAI!" A rattle as a hand closed around the doorknob. A subsequent rattle as it began to turn.
*Where the hell are my clothes?!* Tai raged silently, looking all around for the pair of brown shorts he always wore, and had put on the edge of his bed just before beginning his little foray into the world of self-pleasure. Now they seemed to have disappeared, maybe sucked into one of the many transdimensional vortexes that occur naturally in a young person's bedroom.
Tai tossed his sheets aside with frustration. Wherever the shorts had been, they were gone now, and that was a Bad Thing.
"TAI!"
He threw a blanket over his lap just as the door swung open with startling force, slamming against the wall and bouncing back, vibrating slightly.
"TAI!"
"God! Don't you knock?!" Tai yelled, throwing one hand up in the air in exasperation. The other hand held the blanket tightly against his body. He took no risks.
"TAI!" Kari yelled a seventh time, both of her hands clenched into fists, arms bent and held near her body. "Tai, there's a carnival being held in Kichigaisakka Park today! Can you take me? Canya canya canya?" She bounced from toe to heel with excitement, rocking like some mad inmate.
Tai ran his fingers through his hair in irritation. "Can't Mom take you? I'm busy." Beneath his other hand, his erection twitched, and he almost smiled.
"Nope!" Kari chirped cheerfully. "Mom 'n Dad are gone. It's just you 'n me!"
"WHAT?" Tai bellowed. "When did they leave?!"
"Just now. Mom said they won't be back for a few hours." She stuck the tip of a finger in her mouth and looked up at the ceiling thoughtfully. "Daddy said they were going to a motel. I don't have any idea why."
Tai's face abruptly did its impression of a ripe tomato. "Er...I have no clue, Kari!" he said shrilly, waving his free hand in the air, as if trying to ward Kari's curiosity away from the thought. "I wouldn't think about it, if I were you."
Kari looked at him, and for a fleeting moment Tai thought she was going to call him out on his lie. He gulped and tried frantically to think up some more bullshit to feed to her.
With a big, toothy smile, Kari said "Okay!" which relieved a considerable amount of pressure from Tai's chest. Then, holding her hands together behind her back and swiveling her hips slightly, she repeated "Can you take me?" Her eyes immediately became wet brown polished crystals, begging silently. "Please?"
It was this puppy-dog look that finally broke Tai's resistance. "Fine, fine! I'll take you! Now can you get out? I have to get dressed."
"'Kay! Make it quick!" Kari hopped out of the room, closing the door behind her.
Tai sighed with relief. Maybe now he could finish masturbati--
Tai blinked, and looked down.
"Aw, shit," he groaned, as he looked despondently down at his erection, which was slowly shrinking before his very eyes, as though it had somehow sprung a leak and the blood inside was swiftly fleeing its tissue prison. Instead of the mighty spear of flesh and fluid that it had once been, it was now a measly little pocket-knife, flimsy and useless, a tiny pink worm.
"Well," he grumbled, "I guess that's that." He pulled up his underwear and began the hunt for his shorts.
***
Once the door was closed behind her, Kari pumped her fist.
*Yes!* she thought, grinning. *Today is my day! Ohhhhh, today is gonna be GREAT!*
Still grinning, she did a little spin across the floor, the spin terminating with her hands clasped together in front of her, eyes gazing up at the ceiling, big pink hearts inflating inside them.
"Oh, Tai..."
***
******
Whaddaya think, eh? It's not too bad right now, but I worry what havoc I'll wreak when I get to the sex scene...
agz [/i]
This is merely the beginning of the story. I'll post more when I've written more.
******
This is a lemon. If you don't know what that means, leave. If you think it's a yellow citrus fruit with a tangy, sour taste, leave. If you think it has anything to do with meringue and a nice, flaky crust, leave. If you think it's the major ingredient in a bittersweet liquid most commonly drunk during the summer months, leave. If you think it's something that goes best with lime in a soft drink, leave. If you think you can impale it on the rim of your glass of iced tea, leave.
If you DO read this, and discover that a lemon is NOT what you thought it was, you have learned your lesson, you little goober, and don't you go bothering me with your whining and petty lawsuits. I have better things to do, like listening to my toenails grow. Or my hair. The hair sounds especially nice in July and August. ^_^
If you do have a clue as to what a lemon is, enjoy. Or not. You decide.
This is Season 01, or, rather, shortly thereafter.
And on with the show!
***
I JUST LOVE YOU
by _agz_
Tai was jacking off to a different beat, his eyes fluidly dancing from panel to panel.
"Oh, Hotaru-chan..." he whispered, his body shifting with every downstroke his hand made on his rigid phallus. His other hand, while not nearly as active, was nonetheless busy as it held open Tai's copy of the "Submission Saturn" doujinshi. Some of the pages were visibly crusted together, and, as Tai did some manual maintenance, white flakes could be seen falling away from the mass and landing gently on the equally white sheets, where they dropped into blank anonymity.
Something in his balls twitched, and Tai gripped his dick tighter. He was almost there. Climax was just over a rise that was masturbation itself, he could see it from here. Just a little more, almost there, three, two, one--
"TAI!"
He froze, hand stuck on an upstroke.
"TAI!"
He thawed, and the hand holding the magazine flipped it closed and, in a flash of flesh and paper, dipped in and out of the crevice between the mattress and the frame of the bed. Now you see it, now you don't. There is nothing up my sleeve.
"TAI!" He could hear the ominous sound of shoes, thumping on the hardwood floor of the apartment, coming down the hall, coming towards *him*. Panicked, he shoved his still-hard member into his underwear.
"TAI!" A rattle as a hand closed around the doorknob. A subsequent rattle as it began to turn.
*Where the hell are my clothes?!* Tai raged silently, looking all around for the pair of brown shorts he always wore, and had put on the edge of his bed just before beginning his little foray into the world of self-pleasure. Now they seemed to have disappeared, maybe sucked into one of the many transdimensional vortexes that occur naturally in a young person's bedroom.
Tai tossed his sheets aside with frustration. Wherever the shorts had been, they were gone now, and that was a Bad Thing.
"TAI!"
He threw a blanket over his lap just as the door swung open with startling force, slamming against the wall and bouncing back, vibrating slightly.
"TAI!"
"God! Don't you knock?!" Tai yelled, throwing one hand up in the air in exasperation. The other hand held the blanket tightly against his body. He took no risks.
"TAI!" Kari yelled a seventh time, both of her hands clenched into fists, arms bent and held near her body. "Tai, there's a carnival being held in Kichigaisakka Park today! Can you take me? Canya canya canya?" She bounced from toe to heel with excitement, rocking like some mad inmate.
Tai ran his fingers through his hair in irritation. "Can't Mom take you? I'm busy." Beneath his other hand, his erection twitched, and he almost smiled.
"Nope!" Kari chirped cheerfully. "Mom 'n Dad are gone. It's just you 'n me!"
"WHAT?" Tai bellowed. "When did they leave?!"
"Just now. Mom said they won't be back for a few hours." She stuck the tip of a finger in her mouth and looked up at the ceiling thoughtfully. "Daddy said they were going to a motel. I don't have any idea why."
Tai's face abruptly did its impression of a ripe tomato. "Er...I have no clue, Kari!" he said shrilly, waving his free hand in the air, as if trying to ward Kari's curiosity away from the thought. "I wouldn't think about it, if I were you."
Kari looked at him, and for a fleeting moment Tai thought she was going to call him out on his lie. He gulped and tried frantically to think up some more bullshit to feed to her.
With a big, toothy smile, Kari said "Okay!" which relieved a considerable amount of pressure from Tai's chest. Then, holding her hands together behind her back and swiveling her hips slightly, she repeated "Can you take me?" Her eyes immediately became wet brown polished crystals, begging silently. "Please?"
It was this puppy-dog look that finally broke Tai's resistance. "Fine, fine! I'll take you! Now can you get out? I have to get dressed."
"'Kay! Make it quick!" Kari hopped out of the room, closing the door behind her.
Tai sighed with relief. Maybe now he could finish masturbati--
Tai blinked, and looked down.
"Aw, shit," he groaned, as he looked despondently down at his erection, which was slowly shrinking before his very eyes, as though it had somehow sprung a leak and the blood inside was swiftly fleeing its tissue prison. Instead of the mighty spear of flesh and fluid that it had once been, it was now a measly little pocket-knife, flimsy and useless, a tiny pink worm.
"Well," he grumbled, "I guess that's that." He pulled up his underwear and began the hunt for his shorts.
***
Once the door was closed behind her, Kari pumped her fist.
*Yes!* she thought, grinning. *Today is my day! Ohhhhh, today is gonna be GREAT!*
Still grinning, she did a little spin across the floor, the spin terminating with her hands clasped together in front of her, eyes gazing up at the ceiling, big pink hearts inflating inside them.
"Oh, Tai..."
***
******
Whaddaya think, eh? It's not too bad right now, but I worry what havoc I'll wreak when I get to the sex scene...
agz [/i]