09-26-2006, 03:05 AM
I admit my setting descriptions still need work.
I can redo the scene and have Delta land some hits. This story is far from finished, so don't think what you're looking at is the final product.
I figured it wouldn't be a good fight scene if I only focused on one character. Most books I've read that involved sword-fighting scenes (Star Wars, Batman Begins) described all the particpants' actions.
I can redo the scene and have Delta land some hits. This story is far from finished, so don't think what you're looking at is the final product.
I figured it wouldn't be a good fight scene if I only focused on one character. Most books I've read that involved sword-fighting scenes (Star Wars, Batman Begins) described all the particpants' actions.