09-15-2006, 02:17 PM
I *am* chilling. This is my relaxed, natural tone of voice for criticizing writing.
You are right about whose fists formed the crater, but that still testifies against David's power. No human can fight an Ultimate Digimon, let alone a practiced and experienced one like Epsilon, alone. Period.
Overally, I think you need to move the plot along and introduce more characters. I much agree that Gatomon makes the better Alpha, and in fact think that Red Rover planned her ascension to that throne all along.
You are right about whose fists formed the crater, but that still testifies against David's power. No human can fight an Ultimate Digimon, let alone a practiced and experienced one like Epsilon, alone. Period.
Overally, I think you need to move the plot along and introduce more characters. I much agree that Gatomon makes the better Alpha, and in fact think that Red Rover planned her ascension to that throne all along.