My AU of Red Rover's End Game story

[Anonmon]

I was basing it off how she got Cody, only my character was able to fight back. And when I first started this story, I was, for lack of better terms, asexual, so there wasn't really any drive to put in any sex.

That doesn't matter. Sluttiness is a basic part of Epsilon's character, and removing it makes her a different character. Please, either write her as a slut, or write another character.

I really need to be more clear on things. This AU doesn't follow Red Rover's storyline except for Izzy's rise to power; the digidestined aren't brought into this reality. And my character will have special powers, but he's not related to Izzy in any way.

Then David really is a Gary Stue, and you need to take away some of his powers. Strength and speed to take out muggers, I can accept from a street urchin character. Crater-forming punches and the strength and reflexes to fight a well-honed ultimate Digimon, I have a problem with.