04-19-2003, 05:37 PM
That was a great fic! Just one small problem:
'It might actually be nice to see someone else in here next time...' he thought, bringing an arm down and resting his fingers against his slicked chest.
'It might actually be nice to see someone else in here next time...' he thought, bringing an arm down and resting his fingers against his slicked chest.
XD; you wrote that twice, but other then that it was a really really great fic. keep it up. ^^
'It might actually be nice to see someone else in here next time...' he thought, bringing an arm down and resting his fingers against his slicked chest.
'It might actually be nice to see someone else in here next time...' he thought, bringing an arm down and resting his fingers against his slicked chest.
XD; you wrote that twice, but other then that it was a really really great fic. keep it up. ^^