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Please read and review - Ruhe - 03-14-2003
Title: Digimon Moon
Antylamon and Pajiramon were attacking a city. Takato, Henry and Ryo could not manage to escape, they were captured by Antylamon and Pajiramon.
- Waru_the_Magnificent - 03-14-2003
... ok... I don't want to sound like I'm ripping on you or anything, Daniel... but... WHAT?!?!?!?
Ok, the plot was confusing, if not a little hastily put together. If you were trying to make a "Sailor Moon" parody... then shotren it to Digi moon, and DON'T add THE in front of it.... do I ever hear characters say "it's THE Sailor Moon"? NOOOOO!
Also, what''s up with the humans getting their clothes ripped/burned off? I found that alone to be quite pointless. And the sex scene could've been thought up more thouroughly.
I'm sorry if I've came off too harsh... Anyone ELSE want to put in there P's and Q's?