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Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm - Wisemon - 07-17-2007
What should I do for my 4000th post? I considered posting some of the epic conclusion of my Digimon fan fiction series, but then I decided to go with something you'll actually read. The following is a poem that I'll have to take down if I ever manage to get it published, but it's probably a bit too controversial for the average poetry magazine. This should also start a conversation that was mysteriously absent.
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RE: Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm - Herr Mullen - 07-17-2007
A very provokative poem which has a clear messahe and some critisism for all sides of the arguement. I loved it.
RE: Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm - senjuro - 07-17-2007
The whole thing just makes you think. And it has this driving force that made me want to read the whole thing, which is odd for me because generally I don't like poetry. It was damn good.
The last stanza is true poetics right there.
RE: Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm - Frisk E. Coyote - 07-17-2007
*sniff* Beautiful. It bears amazing resemblance to the thoughts that race through my head every time I sit in the loo, taking a dump! Bravo.
Happy 4000 posts Mr. Wisemon!
RE: Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm - UnknownH - 07-17-2007
You're a dork loki. Now then, Incredibly great work Wise. You almost have to ask how you can do this.
RE: Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm - Frisk E. Coyote - 07-18-2007
Yay! I'm a dork! I've been promoted!
RE: Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm - Wisemon - 07-18-2007
Quote:*sniff* Beautiful. It bears amazing resemblance to the thoughts that race through my head every time I sit in the loo, taking a dump! Bravo.Actually, I've written some of my best poems while taking a dump, though this wasn't one of them. A reliable clipboard is very convenient.
Quote:Now then, Incredibly great work Wise. You almost have to ask how you can do this.Thank you, but I feel it's best not to question it. If I had to give out the secret, I would say the real key is just putting time into it.
Quote:The whole thing just makes you think. And it has this driving force that made me want to read the whole thing, which is odd for me because generally I don't like poetry. It was damn good.Thank you, Senjuro. I especially like good reviews from people who don't normally like poetry. You pointed out another key: the last stanza is always critical.
The last stanza is true poetics right there.
Quote:A very provokative poem which has a clear messahe and some critisism for all sides of the arguement. I loved it.Thanks, I guess I did hit all sides. I try to do that on every issue. That's why I wanted to mod the Debate Forum.
RE: Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm - Frisk E. Coyote - 07-19-2007
Yay! Something in common! I've never written a poem though...