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Help! I'm stuck! - Master Grim - 08-30-2006
I'm planning a soft BDSM lemon. Renamon (dom) and Rika (sub). Any suggestions?
- Nate Hunter - 08-30-2006
Make sure that your story really gives the readers a good idea of why Ruki/Rika is being submissive, particularly to Renamon. Aside from that, I'd rather not comment at present. Maybe after a bit more time to think on it.
- Master Grim - 08-30-2006
Okay.
And on the why bit...
It's simple really. Rika just says one insult too many. Combined with a slight other factor...
Which anyone can probably guess.
- UnknownH - 08-31-2006
I think I've seen a manga with some parts of this.
- Master Grim - 09-01-2006
Have you? Where is it? I'd like to take a look.
- UnknownH - 09-01-2006
Palcomix.com. Try the sonic and the digimon comics.
- Master Grim - 09-01-2006
*nods* Done. But I need an idea with RENAMON being the dominant one... Not too sure...
- That One Internet Guy - 09-05-2006
Rika makes a light-hearted insult towards Renamon, Renamon pushes her down light-heardedly on a couch or something similar and soft, but she feels aroused when this happens (because it was a dominant act).
And let it unravel from there.
- Master Grim - 09-06-2006
Hmm... *grin* That's great! *leaps on Ghost_Op* ^_^ Thanks!
- Cel - 09-21-2006
*Stares dreamily...*
Quote:I think I've seen a manga with some parts of this.
I think I saw one panel of that, somewhere...
Anyway, is this finished? ^.^