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- circeus - 05-09-2006
I have to say I found it really amazing. very hot. Guilmon with a Bukkake fetish is a very interesting twist.
I'd consider reworking the sentence where you refer back to Veemon ("This drove Veemon wild.") It made me do a double/triple take, in a "WTF when did he get in there" manner.
Also, it looks like there's alittle continuity glitch. Guilmon's first laod seems to... disappear at some point between his orgasm and Gabumon moving down his body.
- Gunter VanCrimson - 05-11-2006
what's bukkake?
- DragonMasterX - 05-12-2006
I think he means feet/toes.
- Gunter VanCrimson - 05-12-2006
YAY- Then I have that fetish too!
- blueeyedgabulvo0o - 05-13-2006
:shock: ....fetishy.....
- circeus - 05-13-2006
DragonMasterX Wrote:I think he means feet/toes.
Actually, Bukkake is getting creamed in the face by multiple people. The proper term would be "facial"apparently.
God, i love wikipedia
- DragonMasterX - 05-13-2006
Oh well.
- Gunter VanCrimson - 05-14-2006
I still have that fetish!
- Flamedramon4ever - 05-15-2006
Good couple, great author, one question. Why does everyone treat Guilmon as the idiot who knows nothing? x.x
- DV85 - 05-15-2006
Quote:Why does everyone treat Guilmon as the idiot who knows nothing?
The way I look at it is that Guilmon was newly created by Takato and didn't grow up through the years learning things like pretty much every other digimon would have. Therefore, he was sort of like born that first night in the pit having the intelligence of a newborn who obviously know very little about anything. As the season shows, Guilmon eventually became more mature although in terms of intelligence within stories it all depends on what point in the season it takes place.