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The Coming of Darkness please R&R - The Reclaimer - 05-18-2004
This is a Tai/Kari lime which may be a part of a series, it depends on what people think so please R&R.
Disclaimer: I don't own Digimon or the characters or claim that I do. I am just a fan writing a story about Digimon. The following is a lemon and as such contains adult material. If you aren't 18 or you are offended by material such as this then don't read it. Otherwise enjoy!
The Coming of Darkness
By: The Reclaimer
Kari ran up the stairs to her apartment, the heavy winds and freezing rain pounded upon her delicate frame that was concealed only by a light t-shirt and tight gym shorts.
- UnknownH - 05-18-2004
hmmm interesting continue
- _agz_ - 05-19-2004
Mwaaaaaaaah!
Very good, only a few grammar mistakes, very erotic. Please write more. *puppy dog eyes* Please?
agz
- The Reclaimer - 05-19-2004
Well thank you for the comments, I hope to see more! ^-^
_agz_ if you can please PM me with those grammar errors you found, I'd like it to be as perfect as possible.
Also I do have a Part 2 written, but it is very rough and will take a bit of editing before it is ready, hopefully by Sunday (the 23rd) I'll have it up.
- _agz_ - 05-20-2004
Should I go ahead and fix 'em, or just point 'em out? Or both?
agz
- The Reclaimer - 05-20-2004
Which ever is easiest for you.