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First Chapter of my new series - Lord Patamon - 12-13-2003
LP: Hey guys, after a good time without write a lemon (5 months actually) I finally managed to write a second lemon
- urban dream - 12-14-2003
Hey, that really wasn't bad! :) It wasn't too short, had a lot of clear descriptions and was pretty believable. Rock on! ^^
- Hikari Yagami Kamiya - 12-18-2003
Very nice LP ^_^
I wonder who Veemon gets? hmmm oh and for a second couple I'd suggest Hawkbiyo since that could also work too
- Lord Patamon - 12-19-2003
don't worry I'm thinking in a good couple for Veemon, but that is a surprise, and about the HawkBiyo, I already had thought in that couple too.
glad you liked the first chapter, is was worth delay five months in release it here
- Red Mage Dragon Tiamat - 12-27-2003
After all you are fair enough to give Veemon a girl too.
Nice work man. ^.^ Makes me feel to work on my non-hentai series and a few lemons I got to do ;)
Keep it up, and give Veemon a nice girl, man ;)
- Lord Patamon - 12-27-2003
glad you like the lemon Tia, and don't worry Veemon's gonna get a good girl to love I just need to plan that lemon fine before releasing it so you can and everyone can enjoy it just like enjoyed this one that to tell the truth I'm really surprised that it got a good critic, that means that I improved :D
well see ya and keep going with your writing too
- Red Mage Dragon Tiamat - 12-28-2003
of course you have :P
can'T wait for the next lemon