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Revialisa Chronicals Ch1: A Rose in the Flower Garden (Needs a Review) - Chaotic Phoenix - 03-15-2012
Ok... I know I haven't been... around in a while, lots of real life issues issues at the moment regarding moving out not once but twice and currently internet-less once more, but I do have the first half of the story checked and cleared.
http://darkknightmatt.deviantart.com/#/d4ntttq (Part 1 of 2)
I'll post up the next one once it's cleared. I'll admit this is a lot better than it was originally written but I would love any and all comments and criticism either here or on the DeviantArt page. Any is greatly appreciated and honesty grants even more points lol.