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RE: Blackwargreymon's Desires Part 1 (Warning, Lemon) - Ninja_Kharlan - 04-25-2011
Terrible. Non descriptive, senseless, pointless, did I mention non descriptive? It was also too straight foward, and you need to space your paragraphs better, nothing artistic about it.
Can't say I got horny off that in any way, and you were even playing on one of my more enjoyed fetishes.
Sad ninja is sad. Well, off to the next one. I hope it's slightly more descriptive.
RE: Blackwargreymon's Desires Part 1 (Warning, Lemon) - Flo-Flo Chique - 04-25-2011
(04-25-2011, 04:07 AM)Ninja_Kharlan Wrote: Terrible. Non descriptive, senseless, pointless, did I mention non descriptive? It was also too straight foward, and you need to space your paragraphs better, nothing artistic about it.
Can't say I got horny off that in any way, and you were even playing on one of my more enjoyed fetishes.
Sad ninja is sad. Well, off to the next one. I hope it's slightly more descriptive.
That really offended me. Please don't talk to me anymore.