A comedy spin-off inspired by Digistar DBZ. Thanks to SonimodB, Togashi, Metal Mikemon, Tank Cop, Hellravenmon, and Boss Reo for letting me write it. This one takes places after we all watch Tank Cop's "Memories: Part 1; The Good Old Days..".
This lemon by Red Rover contains adult concepts from the television show Digimon. Do not proceed if you are under eighteen or the material is illegal in you jurisdiction.
The Critics Series #8
Hellravenmon's "New Experiences" Commentary
(Setting- Thousands of years in the future, the greatest lemon writers are brought back to life. No one can remember the other's lemons.)
TANK COP- So where are we headed now?
RED ROVER- I thought we'd see one of Hellravenmon's next.
HELLRAVENMON- Sounds good.
CHRISTINE- Hey, has anybody seen SonimodB or Boss Reo?
METAL MIKEMON- Must still be in the john.
TOGASHI- For several hours?
RED ROVER- I told them not to eat the vendor chili. Anyway they'll catch up.
CHRISTINE- Well let's see what's playing. (Looks at poster.) HellRavenmon's New Experiences, in which the author is famous for using original characters in.
Disclaimer: I do not own Digimon:Digital Monsters and
I am doing this for pure fun and don't make any
money. I only own the character of Ravenmon.
METAL MIKEMON- So Ravenmon is a registered trademark?
RED ROVER- Ok guess that ends this lemon. Bye all!
HELLRAVENMON- Very funny.
Warning: The story you are about to read is a lemon, a
fanfiction that contain sexual situation involving an
underage human and a Digimon, if you already feel
offended, don't continue reading to come back
complaining later.
TANK COP- So simply put, if you read this it's you own damn fault.
Note:This lemon is set during the fanfiction "The
MetalPiedmon Saga"(That fanfiction is set when season
two should be) MetalPiedmon was created by Matt,
Sphinxmon and her story were created by
KittyKittyChan, Transamon was created by
MetalTransamon.
TOGASHI- Isn't that a little complicated?
TANK COP- You have to read an entire Epic first?
HELLRAVENMON- Actually it was never finished, but it had good characters.
DARK JESTER- Hey I only care about the lemon.
New Experiences
By: HellRavenmon
TOGASHI- A virgin first time?
DARK JESTER- Not for much longer I wager.
Sora slowly opened her eyes. She was in the shade of a tropical tree of some sort. She sat up and looked around. She was near a river in some sort of tropical
forest. She had been blown all the way here when Sphinxmon created a sandstorm and separated her from her friends. She rubbed her aching head.
TOGASHI- Amazing how quickly everybody becomes separated in these stories.
"If I knew that was gonna happened I would have kept
my helmet." She said to herself.
Suddenly, she realized her partner was missing. Maybe she
had been separated in the fall.
METAL MIKEMON - Biyomon's not here, so they must have been separated. How very logical.
"BIYOMON!WHERE ARE YOU?" She shouted.
"Over here Sora!" Yelled Biyomon from the bushes.
TOGASHI- Not a very good protector if she leaves her friend alone, hurt, and guarded.
"What are you doing over there?"asked Sora.
"I went picking for lunch." Answered Biyomon, coming out of
the bushes, her hands full of berries and fruits
CHRISTINE- When did she have hands? She's a bird. She has wings.
HELLRAVENMON- You know what I mean.
"Did you see any of the others?" Asked Sora, taking a bite out of an apple.
METAL MIKEMON- Where do they get apples in the Digital World?
HELLRAVENMON- They had everything from subway cars to oil refineries. They can find apples.
"No we got separated in the sandstorm, I'm sorry I couldn't beat Sphinxmon." Answered Biyomon.
TANK COP- Who's Sphinxmon?
HELLRAVENMON- Another lady digimon, and lemon possibility. Tai is getting acquainted as we speak.
CHRISTINE- The Digital World needs more womon.
"Don't feel bad, she was a Mega Digimon." Added Sora. "BUT NOW SHE'S THE LEAST OF YOUR PROBLEMS!" Shouted a high pitched female evil voice.
TOGASHI- Another lady digimon.
RED ROVER- I hope so.
The two girls jumped to their feet and looked around. All there was around were trees, rocks, their food and the river.
CHRISITINE- Now they're hearing voices.
"Who are you? Show yourself!" Asked Sora defiantly.
TOGASHI- Or just stay hiding. We can leave.
"Oh...I am simply...the Ultimate Nightmare!" Said the voice. Suddenly, the rock that Biyomon had been sitting on changed into a Transamon. She tackled Biyomon, sending her across the river and knocking her down. She turned to Sora who was about to run off to Biyomon's help.
DARK JESTER- The ability to turn into a rock. Impressive. Cower and fear all.
"Don't even move human! I am Transamon, Queen of All Shapes, I am a Mega Digimon and I can kill you with a slice of my Transa Tail Blade." She said evilly in the
same voice that had talked before.
TANK COP- And that was the introduction. Catchy.
"Are you...working for Sphinxmon or Ravenmon?" Asked Sora, swallowing her fears.
TANK COP- Does it matter who she works for?
RED ROVER- Hope she works for Gennai.
"No you foolish human. I work WITH them, all three of us were given power by the same being for whom we work for now." Said Transamon.
RED ROVER- Ah, another epic lemon writer!
HELLRAVENMON- Just working within an already epic tale.
RED ROVER- Hey, I've always been big in plot.
Suddenly, two green vines shot out of Transamon's back, one tied around Sora's chest and the other around her lower legs.
METAL MIKEMON- I see she's part Palmon as well.
DARK JESTER- Nothing wrong with a little tentacle action.
"As you could see, I have the power to transform into mostly anything." Said Transamon, walking closer to the scared girl.
RED ROVER- Ask her to transform into a fly, the squash her!
HELLRAVENMON- You don't become a Mega by falling for stuff like that!
"What do you want with me?" Asked Sora.
TOGASHI- It's a lemon. Not hard to figure out.
"Simple, your destruction! But for now, what I want, is to have fun." Answered Transamon, forcing Sora to her knees.
RED ROVER- On her knees already. That was quick.
"Hmm...but how could I have fun with you...I never had a human girl as prisoner." Said Transamon, visibly trying to scare her prisoner. She knew it was to late to trick her like Matt. Transamon had a flash of Sphinxmon telling her how she will have fun with Tai when she captured him.
CHRISTINE- She got to Matt already? She works fast.
METAL MIKEMON- IF you can assume any shape, you wouldn't have too much trouble finding companionship.
"I guess that would be a way to have fun with you...but I was never much interested in girls." Said Transamon.
DARK JESTER- But she soon will be.
"What are you talking about?" Ask Sora.
TANK COP- Think hard, this is a lemon after all
"I'm the one talking here!" Answered Transamon, squeezing the girl's chest with her
vine, making her wince in pain.
CHRISTINE- Not much for seduction, is she?
"Maybe...maybe I could...yes...I'm gonna transform into a male Transamon." She said, sitting on her hind legs, she glowed dimly and turned into a male version
of herself, not letting Sora go.
RED ROVER- Gender reversal. Handy trait for a soon to be lesbian.
The human girl's eyes bulged out of their orbit as she saw a large cock growing between Transamon's leg, it was about 8 inches long and almost as thick as her own
arm! She involuntarily opened her mouth wide. Transamon seized the opportunity and forced Sora to bend down, forcing the human girl to take her new member in her mouth. Sora had to fight a gagging reflex as the long member touched the back of her mouth. She was now in tears, but she couldn't sob due to the large cock in her mouth.
TANK COP- Should have kept your mouth shut.
METAL MIKEMON- Hard for a woman to do. (SMACK!) Ouch!
CHRISTINE- There are some female digimon writers you know!
METAL MIKEMON- But none as cute.
"I heard that it is a lot of fun, now SUCK!" Ordered Transamon, but Sora wouldn't comply so she tightened her grip around the girl's chest which immediately started her
sucking.
RED ROVER- Would she even have feeling in her dick? It is a fake.
"Oooh...yeah...suck harder." Moaned Transamon, starting to hump Sora's mouth slowly.
DARK JESTER- Looks like she has lots of feeling.
It was a whole new experience for Transamon, she was surprised she hadn't tought of it before. The feeling was a lot better than the one she could received from
a licking, surely because it was new to her. She knew male Transamon could only cum once during an hour, so she reluctantly remove her cock from Sora's mouth before her pleasure built up too much.
CHRISTINE- No multiple orgasm? That's the best part of being a girl.
"YOU MONSTER! LET ME GO!" Shouted Sora.
CHRISTINE- That never works. Try biting her dick off.
METAL MIKEMON- Her dick….doesn't sound right….
"Hmm...full of angst aren't you? Let's try something else." Said Transamon, forcing Sora to lie down on her back.
TOGASHI- She gets straight to the point.
She produced a third vine and moved the one holding both of the girl's leg to her left leg while the new vine was wrapping around the right one. She forced the
human to spread her legs. Now, Sora was getting REALLY scared, that horrible Digimon was about to shove that big thing up her virgin pussy!
TANK COP- Yup. Virgin.
RED ROVER- For another ten seconds anyway.
Transamon crept to Sora's skirt and lifted it slowly, revealing pink panties with a little damp spot.
METAL MIKEMON- She is enjoying it a bit though, it seems.
"Hmm...I see that good blow job you gave me turned you on too." Said Transamon deviously. Sora cursed her own body.
TOGASHI- She curses a body like that?
METAL MIKEMON- Women are never satisfied with the way the look. (Shrinks away from Christine.) Not everyone can be as beautiful as Christine I mean.
CHRISTINE- Flattery will get you…anything. (Smiles)
The evil Digimon rip off the girl's panties with her claw, revealing a hairless slit.
"Ooh...I bet you're still a virgin!" Said Transamon, and before Sora could say something, the mega Digimon shoved her cock up the human's cunt.
TANK COP- The title New Experiences was a clue.
Sora gasped as she felt the thick object filling her and breaking her hymen. She was hoping her first time would be with Tai, but no, it had to be when she was raped by
an evil Digimon with a fake cock! She started crying and sobbing.
TOGASHI- Just ask her to change into Tai. I'm sure she'd agree.
Transamon enjoyed the feeling of a tight virgin twat hugging her cock, but it didn't felt tight enough. She slowly expanded her size, causing a gasp and a wince of pain from the girl, a bit of blood dripped from the girl's pussy.
RED ROVER- An expanding dick.
TANK CCP- Who says size doesn't matter?
"The fun has just begun." Added Transamon as she started humping and pumping incredibly fast, loving the feeling. Sora was in pain, she was getting rammed hard
and even if she was wet, it was still too big for her. The evil Digimon kept on pumping and humping fast, building up pleasure and letting out moans and groans, while her forced partner was crying and sobbing.
DARK JESTER- Try swearing or threats.
TANK COP- Or sure, threaten the Mega Digimon.
Transamon lifted her prisoner from the ground while moving her vine across the human's chest, squeezing softly from time to time. Sora was fighting the pleasure now that her pussy had gotten used to Transamon's size, and the Digimon wasn't pleased by that, she wanted to make her suffer. She transformed the end of her tail into another cock, smaller this time, only 5 inches, and quickly plunged it in Sora's
tight ass, filling her up. Sora gasped once again, and pain returned as the new member start humping her ass even faster than her pussy was.
DARK JESTER- Dual penetration with only one partner. Morphigenic properties must be a handy trait to have.
CHRISTINE- Sora doesn't think so.
Transamon was in bliss, she was receiving double the pleasure, and Sora's cry of pain were just increasing it. She start to accelerate again, building up her pleasure. Sora was weeping, her tears were flowing quickly. The human girl was fighting the pleasure as hard as she could, and it was easy with the pain she was getting from that double fucking. Transamon gave one last thrust with each of her fake cocks and hit
orgasm, filling both of Sora's holes. Transamon lay down on Sora, panting, listening to the girl's cry, her two dick's still in Sora's ass and pussy
TANK COP- Her dicks….it does sound wrong.
HELLRAVENMON- So she's a hermaphrodite.
"It was good...but not good enough." Said Transamon, getting up and removing her members before returning to normal.
TOGASHI- What exactly is normal for a shape-shifter, anyway?
Sora was scared by what she might be force to do again. Transamon had enjoyed the feeling, but it wasn't enough, she wanted her orgasm to be strong enough to
make her loose containment of her transformation, just like it did with Matt.
TOGASHI- Whoa, the girl gets around.
"You...monster!" Shouted Sora.
TANK COP- Witty insult.
CHRISTINE- I suppose you could do better?
"Well...DUH! Digimon does mean Digital Monster. For a
Digidestined you aren't that smart." Mocked Transamon.
TOGASHI- I am pretty sure that's not what she meant.
The evil Digimon moved toward Sora's face and positioned her dripping pussy above Sora's face, some of her juice fell and mixed with Sora's tears. The girl was afraid
and was about to say something when Transamon lowered her pussy onto her lips quickly. She had her back turned against Sora's body and let her tail blade trail over
the young girl's body.
CHRISTINE- A pussy now.
RED ROVER- Best of both worlds.
"If you know what is good for you, LICK." Ordered Transamon, pushing her womon-hood harder on the human's face.
METAL MIKEMON- Manhood and womanhood.
DARK JESTER- If you tell her to fuck herself she probably could.
CHRISTINE- There are ladies present.
DARK JESTER- Where? (Smack!) Ouch!
Sora reluctantly open her mouth and let her tongue out, she slowly start to lick, as if it was poison. Transamon poked Sora's belly with the tip of her tail.
TANK COP- Is her tail a dick or blade now?
HELLRAVENMON- Does it mater?
"Harder...HARDER." She moaned, liking the feel of a soft human tongue.
TOGASHI- She should be able to make a human tongue to use on herself.
METAL MIKEMON- She doesn't strike me as the solo type.
Sora started to go faster, still weeping and sobbing as much as she could with her mouth filled. She licked as far as she could, increasing her pace every time Transamon poked her belly or squeezed her chest. Transamon was
moaning loudly, but it was still not enough. She decided to transform her tail once again, but this time, she doubled it so she could fuck the girl's two hole again. Sora would have gasped in pain if she hadn't her mouth filled when the two cock filled her again. It felt to her like they were bigger than the last ones. She decided to increase her licking, hoping to make the evil Digimon hit orgasm faster. She started to tongue fuck Transamon, reaching deeper and deeper. Transamon moaned loudly and increased her pace and started moving up and down Sora's face involuntarily. Sora squeezed her hips and asshole, making herself tighter. It caused more pain for
a moment, but it was enough to drive Transamon over the edge who came hard, drenching Sora's face and once again filling her prisoner with semen.
RED ROVER- Okay, how can she have semen? She's a chick!
TANK COP- She can develop a fully functional male reproductive system as well?
HELLRAVENMON- Well she is a Mega. And very talented at transformations.
DARK JESTER- I gathered.
Transamon's orgasm hit her so hard that she lost total containment of her form and fainted. Her vine retracted, and her tail returned to normal, the tip was still in Sora's pussy and made a little cut when Transamon fell on her side and started sleeping. Sora was relieved and got up, she was dripping cum on the ground, she went to clean herself in a hurry and went to see Biyomon.
TOGASHI- You'd think she want to check on Biyomon.
CHRISTINE- Let the girl save some of her dignity.
"Biyomon? Are you alright?" She asked, shaking her friend.
TANK COP- Oh yeah. Shake your seriously hurt friend. That will help.
"Euh...Sora…where is that Digimon?" Asked Biyomon.
DARK JESTER- Why, do you want a turn?
"Don't worry...she...she fell asleep." Answered Sora.
METAL MIKEMON- A reallllyyy good sleep.
"What? How come?" Added the pink Digimon.
DARK JESTER- Or more appropriately…how cum?
"I'll explain later, first let's get out of here, you're in no shape to handle a Mega Digimon." Replied Sora.
TOGASHI- She's asleep! Bludgeon repeatedly with large blunt objects!
"Ok...Biyomon Digivolve to...Birdramon!"
CHRISTINE- She should have done that in the first place!
Sora climbed on Birdramon leg and they took off. Sora shed a few tears but quickly hardened herself. She would get back at Transamon for that, for sure. She looked down, and in a clearing she saw Matt and Gabumon running. Birdramon went down to meet with them.
TANK COP- Or maybe two Transamon are playing a particularly cruel trick.
-The End-
CHRISTINE- Or is it?
METAL MIKEMON- Dun Dun DUN!
Comment? Flames? If you do, go over the Digiartist Domain's message board, I'm over there at least once a day.
RED ROVER- You should give your e-mail address for the comments.
TANK COP- Or flames.
METAL MIKEMON- His lemon wasn't flaming material. I rather enjoyed the Transamon character.
DARK JESTER- Sora didn't. Anyway, it's time to go see one of my lemons now.
TOGASHI- Sounds like a plan. (Everyone files out of the theater, except no one notices Metal Mikemon and Christine lagging behind.)
METAL MIKEMON- So you really liked the lemons I wrote about us?
CHRISTINE- Mmm..yeah…
METAL MIKEMON- How much?
CHRSITINE- (Smiles.) Let me show you. Walks up to Metal Mikemon.)
METAL MIKEMON- Am I lucky or what? (Burst of spiraling flame fills the theater, and a figure appears in the center.)
MYSTERIOUS MAN- Fear me mortal lemon writers!
METAL MIKEMON- Uh, could you come back in five minutes?
MYSTERIOUS MAN- Hmmmmm...No. Now surrender or face me in battle.
CHRISTINE- Boy you are a cocky one. Let's see this is a lemon so... Christine digivolve to …. (Christine's form warps as wings sprout out of her back and a helmet slides over her eyes.) ANGEWOMON! In honour of my first lemon.
METAL MIKEMON- Whoa Cool. Let me try. Metal Mikemon digivolve to…(Metal Mikemon's skins turns to steel, his hair becoming wire.) METAL MIKEMON!
ANGEWOMON- Metal Mikemon digivolve to Metal Mikemon? Can't you be a little more original?
METAL MIKEMON- Hey, Metal Mikemon is original. Angewomon isn't.
ANGEWOMON- At least my form is a better fighter. You don't even have wings.
METAL MIKEMON-I don't need wings. Metal Mikemon flexes.) I have muscles.
ANGEWOMON- But I have arrow's of energy, which makes me a powerful offensive force.
METAL MIKEMON- But my chrome digizoidium hide makes injury….
MYSTERIOUS MAN- Excuse me? Mysterious all-powerful villain here?
METAL MIKEMON- Ah, yes, where are our manners?
ANGEWOMON- Get him! Celestial Arrow! (Blast of energy hits the Mysterious Man in the face.)
METAL MIKEMON- Metal Uppercut! (Lands a powerful blow to the Mysterious Man's chin.)
MYSTERIOUS MAN- That's almost tickling me. Not quite though.
ANGEWOMON- Ok…new plan.
MYSTERIOUS MAN- (Snaps his fingers, and grows to ten times in size.) I'm listening, (His eyes crackle with lightning.) What's the plan?
ANGEWOMON- Divine intervention?
METAL MIKEMON- Complete and utter panic?
MYSTERIOUS MAN- I was thinking more along of the lines of total and absolute surrender.
And that was the continuation of my Critic series. Thanks to Dark Jester, SonimodB, Togashi, Metal Mikemon, Tank Cop, Hellravenmon, and Boss Reo. Any comments, requests, question, writing tips, etc, e-mail me at mrredrover@hotmail.com.
Proofread by: Madman