This lemon by Red Rover contains adult concepts from the television show Digimon. Do not proceed if you are under eighteen or the material is illegal in you jurisdiction.

A comedy spin-off inspired by Digistar DBZ. Thanks to SonimodB, Togashi, Metal Mikemon, and Boss Reo for letting me write it. This one takes places after we all watch SonimodB's 'Izzy Gets Busy."


The Critics Series #4

Red Rover's 'End Game: Chapter 1, Betrayal' Commentary


Setting- Thousands of years in the futures, the greatest digimon lemon writers of all time are resurrected. Red Rover, SonimodB, Boss Reo and Togashi, now reanimated, travel to a lemon theater, where they watch-read each other's lemons. No one can remember the other's lemons.

SONIMODB - So where are we now?
RED ROVER - The lemon writer reanimator. They just got it charged again and they're bring back another lemon writer.
(Spectacular light show as a human figure appears on a star trek transporter like pad.)
BOSS REO - Nice fireworks.
RED ROVER - Special effects are easy in lemons.
METAL MIKEMON - Whoa, what a rush. (Steps down from the pad.)
TOGASHI - Welcome back to the land of the living, Mikemon.
SONIMODB - How do you feel?
METAL MIKEMON - Angry. (Pulls out a Spanish cutlass.) My honor has been insulted Red Rover. I should have been resurrected in the first of your lemons. Prepare to die!
SONIMODB - Where the hell do these weapons keep coming from?
TOGASHI - Ten bucks on Red Rover.
BOSS REO - You're on.
RED ROVER - You're forgetting something Metal Mikemon.
METAL MIKEMON - And what might that be?
RED ROVER - I'm writing this lemon. I have complete control. Watch. (Does a gesture ala Bewtiched, and Metal Mikemon's cutlass turns into a semi-frozen Newfoundland salmon.)
TOGASHI - Neat trick. (Boss Reo hands him ten dollars.) Thanks for the cash.
BOSS REO - Doesn't matter. We're in a lemon.
TOGASHI - Damn, forgot about that.
METAL MIKEMON - Hey no fair!
RED ROVER - Life isn't fair. Get over it. But I'll spare your life, since I respect all Canadians.
TOGASHI - What about Americans?
RED ROVER - Can't live with them.
METAL MIKEMON - And can't relocate your country. (Red Rover and Metal Mikemon laugh.)
SONIMODB - Canadians.
TOGASHI - Tell me about it.
BOSS REO - Enough of the witty banter. We were going to see one of Red Rover's lemons. Coming Mikemon?
METAL MIKEMON - (Sheathing his Newfoundland salmon.) Sure why not?
(All five of them walk into the theater. An announcer comes in front of the screen.)
ANNOUNCER - Welcome to the Red Rover's theater. The master of the epic lemon, and the best looking of all the lemon writers.
METAL MIKEMON, TOGASHI, BOSS REO, SONIMODB - WHAT?! (Look at Red Rover in the middle of them.)
RED ROVER - As I said before, I'm writing this lemon. I'm entitled to a little fun.
TOGASHI - You've got a bit of an ego problem, don't you?
RED ROVER - Not in the slightest. My ego's more than fine.
ANNOUNCER - Today we are playing the very first chapter of his first epic lemon End Game, Betrayal. Enjoy.
(Announcer leaves. Theater goes dark and the lemon starts to play.)

This work of fiction contains adult concepts from the TV show Digimon. Do not proceed if you are under 18, or this material is illegal in your jurisdiction.

BOSS REO - Wimp. You're supposed to say something like, 'If you're under 18, I could care less.'

This is the beginning of my epic lemon, END GAME. It is an on-going lemon, which deals with plot a lot more, but still retains the lemon aspects. It takes place after the defeat of the final dark master Piedmon. This first chapter is mainly plot, but there's lemon at the end.

END GAME

Chapter 1

Betrayal

TOGASHI - Catchy title. Spooky.

"You mean there's still an evil force out there?" Izzy was yelling into the computer. The battle was still raging around them, but their digi allies clearly were winning. The few remaining Vilemon where being chased into the mountains as the digidestined huddled around Izzy's computer.

METAL MIKEMON - I thought the digiworld disintegrated after Piedmon died.
RED ROVER - Not in my epic lemons.
"Yes, unfortunately," Gennai answered through the E-mail on Izzy's laptop, "I have no idea who it is or where it's coming from."
"So what do we do now?" Tai asked. Behind him, their digimon had devolved into their rookie forms, except for Angewoman, who went back to her champion form, Gatomon.
"I'm not sure my friends, but from what I can tell, this mysterious force is going to act shortly." Genni sounded worried over the modem.
As if on cue, the ground started to rumble.
"I have an idea." Everyone turned around; Gatomon had walked to the center of them. "We got back to the digiworld using the digivices, everybody hold out your digivices. Maybe something will happen again."

BOSS REO - What kind of plan is that?
SONIMODB - Sounds like the grasping at straws technique.

"Sounds like a plan." Matt said as he took his digivice off and held it out in his hand. The rest of the digidestined followed suit, holding their digivices in a circle around Gatomon.
"Nothing is happening," Mimi whined. She just wanted to go home.
"Something is happening." Gatomon's voice took a darker tone. Suddenly her eyes turned from their usually bright sky blue, to blood red. With lighting reflexes, she jumped up, spun around, and grabbed five of the digivices, one in each paw and one with her tail. She landed and kicked Sora's hand, the digivice flying out of her grasp. Gatomon then turned to Mimi and lunged. Mimi jumped back, letting go of the digivice. Gatomon picked it up, and caught Sora's digivice as it fell to the earth. "Just not what you expect."

BOSS REO - Didn't see that coming.
SONIMODB - Neither did they I'm guessing.

"What's going on Gatomon?" Kari cried. She was the only one with her digivice left.
"Kari, in case you haven't noticed, I'm evil again. Or I guess more accurately, I stopped pretending to be good." Gatomon jumped out of the circle of her former friends onto a large rock formation. She produced a sack out of a small hole in between the rocks, and dropped the digivices in. She slung the ill-gotten loot over her shoulder.

METAL MIKEMON - Why did you turn Gatomon evil again?
RED ROVER - I liked her the best when she was working for Myotismon.
TOGASHI - Dominant female fetish, am I right?
RED ROVER - Buffy the vampire slayer , Xena, and so on.

"Gatomon why are you doing this?" Tai said, placing himself in front of Kari.
Gatomon sneered at them. "I needed you to defeat Myotismon. I was going to take over the digi-world when I got back, but I need you again to defeat the Dark Masters. Now that they're gone, I am the most powerful digimon in the world."
"Not if we can help it!" Agumon and Gabumon leapt at Gatomon, who batted them away like flies. The two digimon crumbled into a heap together.

BOSS REO - Now I saw that coming.

"I took you all on when you were champions, you don't have a chance in your rookie forms." Gatomon just laughed at them.
"Spiral Twister!"
"Boom Bubble!"
"Super Shocker!"
A trio of blasts came from behind, shattering the rock Gatomon was on moments before. She had jumped straight up and knocked Patamon into Tentomon, then landed on Biyomon's back, slamming her into the ground.

SONIMODB - They don't learn very quickly, do they.
METAL MIKEMON - The never give up, and never think things through.

"Nice try," Gatomon chuckled as she rolled off, "but it's isn't going to work. Now surrender quietly and I won't hurt Oooofff!"
Gomamon had tackled her from behind while Palmon's vines wrapped around the sack. Gatomon screamed with rage. She knocked Gomamon off her, pinning him to the ground with her paw. Palmon had gripped the bag with her poison ivy, but Gatomon slice her vines with her claws. Palmon screamed and retracted her injured appendages.
"Palmon! Are you ok?!" Mimi ran up to Palmon and caught her as she stumbled back. Palmon nodded with a sly smile on her face. Mimi didn't have time to ask why she was smiling. Joe rushed forwards to help Gomamon, but was held back by Matt and Tai.

BOSS REO - You just defeat dozens of ultra powerful beings, and now you're losing to a cat. That would be humiliating.

Gatomon, still standing on top of Gomamon, was laughing now. "Enough of this." She snapped her claws together and suddenly the sky grew dark.
"Black gears!" TK screamed, pointing at the sky. They began pouring down. Mimi's army began to be bombarded as the gears implanted themselves in their friends. In a few seconds, the entire army had been converted to Gatomon's side.

METAL MIKEMON - How did Gatomon get black gears?
RED ROVER - I'd tell you, but it would ruin the plot.

Gatomon smiled evily now. "Now, your immediate surrender would be appreciated," the army moved forward, surrounding the digidestined and their digimon, Gomamon still firmly planted under Gatomon's paw, "but not expected."

SONIMODB - The good guys never surrender.
BOSS REO - It would be a short lemon otherwise.

"Don't worry. I have a plan." Izzy looked down and saw Genni talking on the computer. Suddenly, a fog rolled out of nowhere, so thick that no one could see an inch in front of his or her face. "It's a program designed for hiding files. Now everyone run!" The digidestined took off as fast as they could in different directions. Thanks to the confusing fog, the turned army was in shambles as they took shots at one another. When the fog cleared, the digidestined had all escaped.

METAL MIKEMON - That was convenient.
RED ROVER - Well, if Gatomon caught them all in the first chapter, it wouldn't be an epic lemon. It'd be a paragraph.

"How could you screw this up?" Gatomon screamed at her mind controlled legions. She looked down at the stunned Gomamon under her. "We got one prisoner! ONE! Out of over a dozen!" She kicked Gomamon over to Ogremon. "Take him to Piedmon's lair, now my lair. Lock him up in the dungeon, I'll be there shortly." Ogremon, his eyes as blank as slates, picked up Gomamon and walked towards the castle.

SONIMODB - And cue the ominous music.

"Gomamon why don't you join my little army?" Gomamon was chained on the ground by each of his four flippers. Gatomon was pacing around him, her tail touching Gomamon's face.

METAL MIKEMON - Any bets on who this couple is going to be?
BOSS REO - We're in a lemon, money is nothing, remember?

"I would never betray Joe or my friends unlike you, you traitor!" Gomamon lunged at Gatomon. He struggled against his chains to no avail. Gomamon snapped at her tail, but Gatomon simply pulled it away.
"Now, now, behave yourself." And she smacked Gomamon across the face with her tail, the gold ring leaving a small red mark on his cheek. Gomamon growled under his breath, saying something totally inappropriate for a G audience.

BOSS REO - Brave digimon, isn't he?
RED ROVER - One of the reasons why he's my favorite character.

Gatomon walked over to the wall and pulled a lever which protruded from it, and the chains on his front flippers pulled upwards, so that he was now in a vertical spread eagle position in front of Gatomon. Gatomon walked over to Gomamon and began tracing one of her claws against Gomamon's furred chest. "Come on Gomamon, I know you've had a crush on me, I've seen how you used to look at me when you thought I wasn't looking, even before I left Myotismon's army."
Gomamon sneered at Gatomon, "Even if I did once, any feelings I had for you are long gone. Especially since you turned against us."
"Oh really? No feelings at all?" Gatomon tail whipped around from behind her. She placed the tip on Gomamon's crotch and began rubbing. Gomamon gasped, surprised by the sudden sensation. His dick was starting to harden and emerge from its hidden fur pouch. Gatomon looked down at it and smiled, "It seems that there's still something there." She wrapped her tail around Gomamon's shaft and began to jerk up and down. Gomamon's dick became rock hard almost instantly, even though he tried to will his body not to.

SONIMODB - I thought you said Gomamon was your favorite character?
RED ROVER - He is.
TOGASHI - So why do you have him chained up and get raped by Gatomon?
RED ROVER - Because he's my favorite.
SONIMODB - Ah.

"Oh come on Gomamon, admit it. Even after all I've done, you still want me." Gatomon said as she drew figure eights with her claw across his chest.
Gomamon bit down hard on his lip. He spoke through clenched teeth, "I want nothing to do with you." He was lying though. Even after Gatomon's betrayal, he still thought of her as one of the most beautiful digimon anywhere.

SONIMODB - Considering there are only half a dozen female digimon, that's not too hard.

Gatomon chuckled to herself. "Your mouth says no, but your eyes," she looked down at his hardened cock, "among other things, say yes." She bent down and began to lick Gomamon's dick with her rough tongue. Gatomon started rubbing her tongue against the top and worked her way down. After she had worked her tongue all the way back up his dick again, she deep-throated the entire cock. She lifted her tail up and began rubbing Gomamon on the chest again as she gave him his blowjob. A few drops of pre-cum began to dribble out of the tip, causing Gomamon to fight his body's urges even more.

TOGASHI - Complete fiction.
RED ROVER - What do you mean?
TOGASHI - Who would resist?

Gomamon bit down even harder on his lip to keep his orgasm from coming. Gatomon stopped and removed the swollen dick from her mouth. "Are you holding back Gomamon?" She put her paws on his shoulders. "Good, that way it'll last longer." Gomamon replied by spitting on Gatomon's cheek. Gatomon took her paw and scraped off the saliva with a single claw. She placed the claw in her mouth and licked it clean. She smirked at Gomamon's expression. "I see you're finally getting into it Gomamon."

METAL MIKEMON - Now THAT would turn me on, prisoner or not.

Gatomon placed her paw back around Gomamon's neck and lifted herself up. Her face was now just a few inches away from Gomamon's. She wrapped her legs around his chest, and lowered herself onto his still erect cock. "Puurrrrrrrr, that feels good, doesn't it?" Gomamon just sneered again, trying hard not to start moaning himself. 
Gatomon didn't wait for an answer, even if she expected one. She began to hump Gomamon's dick. She pulled herself up using Gomamon's neck, and lowered herself again. She began to purr loudly now. Gomamon was also now moaning softly, even though he still was trying to fight his hormones. Gatomon's tail whipped around and began to rub Gomamon's ass. Her tail felt around until it found his asshole. She began to insert her tail in and out as she continued to hump her unwilling partner. Gomamon was moaning even louder now. His lower lip was begging to bleed now, since he was biting down on it so hard.

BOSS REO - I admire his restraint. No one else would try that hard.

Gatomon could feel her orgasm near, so she increased her pace. Gomamon could feel his own orgasm coming on now, and even though he tried to fight, he knew he couldn't hold out forever. The chains that held Gomamon began to sway in pace with Gatomon's frantic humping. Each time she thrust herself down, the dungeon echoed with purring and rattling chains. Finally, Gomamon came, filling Gatomon up with his cum. Gatomon squeezed Gomamon tightly between her legs, taking his breath away, as she felt her own orgasm run through her. She let out a long meow as the last traces of her orgasm subsided.
Gatomon released her grip on Gomamon and fell to the floor. "There now, I said you still had feelings for me, and I was right."
Gomamon, breathing deeply from the whole experience, worded out his answer. "I have ..feelings for you…I feel.. you're ..a bit.." Gatomon's tail flicked up and slapped his face again, ending the sentence before it finished.

TOGASHI - I wonder what he was going to say?
RED ROVER - Sarcasm noted.

"You really must learn to watch that tongue of yours." Gatomon jumped up again and licked him once across the cheek. "I know how to use mine properly," she laughed as she jumped down.
Gatomon walked to the dungeon door. She turned around and addressed Gomamon once again, "I'm glad we had this little 'chat'." She chuckled in spite of herself. "Feel free to think my offer over, we have lots of other opportunities to discuss the matter."

BOSS REO - I would never talk.
SONIMODB - Why is that?
BOSS REO - For more of her 'sessions'.

Gomamon growled and thrashed against his bonds again. Gatomon opened the dungeon, shutting it behind her, leaving Gomamon to his entrapment.

BOSS REO - If that would be my prison stay, I wouldn't try to escape.

"Why don't you destroy him? He's still a threat." The voice was dark, almost ominous.

BOSS REO - Who's that speaking?
RED ROVER - Guess.
TOGASHI - That could be anyone.
RED ROVER - Hey I'm big into plot twists.

Gatomon twirled her sack of digivices in her hand. "No. If I wanted the digidestined destroyed, I could have killed them in their sleep. Victory loses a bit of luster if there is no one to brag to, besides, if I can turn them to my side, it just increases my power."

METAL MIKEMON - Why do villains always let the heroes live? They should kill them on the spot.
RED ROVER - As I said before, that makes for very short lemons.

A second voice, this one high pitch, almost childish, came from the shadows. "But your previous digimon friends are still powerful, their combined might is greater than yours." 

SONIMODB - Ok that's Puppetmon.
RED ROVER - I'd admit that one was pretty obvious.

Gatomon chuckled. "I didn't bring you back from deletion to lecture me. In case you've forgotten, they defeated you too. I can also send you back with a snap of my claws. Besides, they can only digivolve with the aid of the digivices, which I happen to have right here."
The sack was ceremoniously lifted up, and the contents dumped on the table. The digivices spread across the table. A third melodic and final voice spoke, "Un huh. It seems that you have trouble keeping beat. Last time I counted, there were seven digidestined, not including your beloved Kari. There seem to be only five devices on that table.

BOSS REO - And that has to be Etemon or Metaletemon.
RED ROVER - Very observant.

Gatomon glared down at the table. It was true. Two of the digivices were missing. "What?! How can this be?" She opened the sack to check, and found two holes in the bottom. "Palmon," she growled. "She must have broken through my sack and swiped two of the devices." She brought her hand down on the table. "You three! I brought you back for several reasons. One, you're powerful. Two, you hate the digidestined. And three, you're smart enough to realize that I can delete you again, hence I control you. Now find them! Scour everywhere!"

METAL MIKEMON - Scour everywhere, a classic villain phrase.
BOSS REO - No, the classic is "Fools, I will destroy them all!"
SONIMODB - Ok, that's a little too B monster movie.

The three shapes left the room in order to accomplish their task. Gatomon sat back down. There was no reason to get worried. The digidestined were separated, they didn't know who the devices belonged to, and she still had her army, as well as one final ace up her glove. She laughed to herself. There was no need to worry.

TOGASHI - Nice set up for an epic.

This is the first chapter of my epic lemon. There will be many sequels to this one. I would really like to know what people think about this plot. If anyone has any suggestion for a topic for this, or if there is a picture you want me to write a story with, just mention it. Any comments, suggestions, writing tips, feel free to post them at this site or e-mail me at mrredrover@hotmail.com

BOSS REO - Excellent plot, with lemon to go along with it.
SONIMODB - So who should we see next?
METAL MIKEMON - Well, I was brought back, we should at least see one of mine I hope.
RED ROVER - Works for me. Onward, through Lemon History!


Thanks to SonimodB, Boss Reo, Metal Mikemon, and Togashi for allowing me to write this. Any comments, requests, writing tips, etc, post them or send me an e-mail of mrredrover@hotmail.com.